Talk:Great American Empire

Problems
Hey! I really like your project. Its very quirky and different and I've never seen anything like it on any geofiction site. The concept is good but some of the fundamentals of the story is poor. Firstly your grammar is somewhat poor. I understand were all victims of bad grammar but mistakes such as "Head of State" are incorrect and should be replaced by "head of state". Just little things like that need to be fixed.

Also the numbers in your military are extremely small! Your empire covers 71 million square kilometres which is absolutely huge. Your military of 2,000,000 men isn't exactly cut out to protecting the ground area. Your navy seems well covered and I think 900,000 vehicles would be enough. Anyway you may want to increase the numbers in your military active or reserve force.

I hope these few tips help you improve your article!

CnocBride (Talk Page)  10:36, June 27, 2017 (UTC)