Talk:Üdîm Mürrîwäthér

I'm seeing a consistent, if not repetitive, trend in your bios. I am going to dissect this bio bit by bit.

First of all, the name makes no sense. It sounds like "Adam Merriweather" spoken by someone with a mouth full of marshmallows.

Mürrîwäthér was born to a rich family in Trilfuva on 18 May 1748. So far, so good. For once, the age of your subject is logical.

He studied politics and home affairs at the university. How does one study "politics" and "home affairs" at a university, especially in the 18th Century (when the curriculum was much smaller)? And which university? (I know there's a link, but that part of the sentence is too vague when taken at face value.)

In 1802, Mürrîwäthér saw an advertizement for the 1802 Choosings, and signed up for them as Minister of Home Affairs. I don't know if you mean it this way, but this sentence reads as if he answered a want-ad for the position. Cabinet members are normally appointed by the Head of State or Government, and these appointees have years of practical or political experience which merits their appointments.

He won the job, Redundant.

and had a fine term, How was it "fine"? Was he a capable or incompetent administrator? Were there problems within his department?

apart from some high home affairs bills,. What "high home affairs bills"? Please elaborate on these bills. What impact did they have on his office and the nation? How did he face these challenges? Was he able to overcome them? What were the long-term implications of these bills?

which disrupted his term slightly. If something disrupted his term "slightly", then it's not worth mentioning in the bio.

A few things to consider:

1) Focus on quality, not quantity. If it takes you 1-2 weeks to write an article, then take those weeks to write it.  I'd rather see a well-written article published every other week than a half-baked article published daily.

2) Three words to consider - research, research, research. Understand what was going on in the world and what impact it would have on the country.  Keep your history and customs consistent with the times.  Remember that NRW nations do not exist in a vacuum.

3) It's been said before, but I'll say it again - please keep in line with the NRW rules.